I wake up in my car alone hanging on a wire,
and by the looks of things, I may have lost a tire!
How did I get up here I ask myself,
how did I indeed?
It must have been a long night,
for my car took flight,
and I must have fell asleep.
Now i'm hanging on a wire,
and i've lost a tire
Oh deary, deary me.
Author notes
I tried to be humorous but I don't know if that worked out the way I wanted it to.. i'm not sure if it ended the way I would have liked.. I could have made it better but you only allowed 10 lines.
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- Image Inspiration #5 by Grey Mouser.
425 points, ended March 10, 2007, 25 entries
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Thats where the challenge comes into play. It may not have had the imapct you desired but was still humorous none the less. Would be an interesting place to wake up in.
Thank you for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
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thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it. i enjoy entering contests even when i know that i won't win.
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Just My Opinion...but
I think you pulled it off with flair and finesse.
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why thank you. I could have made it better tho, if I had of been able to use more lines. but I was limited to 10.
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Hey there, thank yuo so much for the comment you left on my poem "FInal Hour". I think you did a great job on this piece The picture is PERFECT for your poem, and your poem is very funny Well done, Keep up the good work
Luv,
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Your welcome, I think your poem was great.
Thanks heaps for your nice comment.
xxSExx
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