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Out For A Drive

A stunt driver, I thought I was,
The thrill, the rush, such applause

Left turn, right, speed, speed, speed
Faster now, filled with greed

Flashing lights, slammed on the gas
Coppers ain't gonna catch my ass

Hit a bump and caught a swerve
Across the grass, flew up the curb

Hung in tow, nose to the sky
But what the hay, I'm still alive

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007
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    LOL, don't see what would be offensive. Thought it was very funny. Sometimes the urge just takes over and the mind steps aside and lets the adreneline take control. Then we end up in these predicaments.
    Thank you for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


  • Onionducks
    March 8, 2007
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    Aww man! Sounds like this was a fun one.. almost want to recreate it... but i wont.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    Talk about being hung This proves there is more than one definition for it! Very funny write. Good luck.

    Jeannie


  • paullallady silver member
    March 5, 2007

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    This is wonderful. So hilarious. Though I am not sure if even a stunt driver could have put a car up there!! lol.
    great job with this one. good luck in the contest

  • SoulWhispher
    March 2, 2007
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    What a ride

    Great little poem, I was along for the ride, you have done a great job here, blessings John


  • Angels Delight
    March 2, 2007
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    Simply WOW

    Strom my sweet friend

    What can I honestly say about this piece that will do it justice...I could see the picture in my mind and you took me on a very intense ride...So I do thank you for that

    Good luck in the contest

    Love ya bunches
    Tes

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