I was upside down, I couldn't see
the fuckin car, got the best of me
I turned the wheel, but it did no good
the only thing I saw, was the fuckin hood
Didn't know, what was up from down
but at least, I was too drunk to frown
So now I'm hanging, on the edge
And as all drunks do, I solemnly pledge
I will drive, drunk no more
from now on, I'll take a cab for sure!
Author notes
ok was drunk when I wrote this lol
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A solemn pledge to the world that many have made or something similar. Could imagine the befuddled thoughts as the driver turned the wheel and stepped on the gas but still could only see the sky, no road to be seen. Now that is one driver that was really flyin high.
Thanks for the entry into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
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ahhh a nice humorous account of drunk people writting about drunk driving lol! great piece it was funny
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Haha, i love it! Nice one!
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LOL Very good job on this! I wonder how it really did get there! Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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A wonderful poem, and hilarious!! I can imagine a drunk waking up to this, lol. Try and explain this to the car insurance company.
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Now talk about a piece of humble pie! So funny! Good luck in the contest
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These poems are so so funny, every one that I have read so far as had me in stitches. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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Oh your hilarious.
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