He touches your hand
you touch back
&& scoot closer together
to find a certain warmth.
Emotions whirling
Sensations highten
the glow in each other's eyes
is enough to light the world.
Two spirits mold to one
The hearts are sewn together
never to separate
always meant to be.
He whispers "I Love You"
into her peach-soft ear
she returns the gesture
snuggling deeper into his arms.
Their crimson flushed faces
decrease their distance
cheek to rosy cheek
&& eyelash to ebony eyelash
They both want
the perfect tender touch
but both are much too shy
to chase it.
So there they lay
in the grass
in perfect silence
waiting.
Waiting for the other
to scare away
the fluttering innocence
of youth.
A contest entry
- Moment Before The Kiss by Cannonsfire.
450 points, ended March 11, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all Poets for Poetry by Dark Whispers.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Very Best #2 (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
415 points, ended April 18, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your best (((Round One))) by Lie 2 Me Once Again.
430 points, ended June 25, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write. I like this alot.
Thanks for entering
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Such a terrific poem..very creative and beautiful,,your wording was great and the imagery was so well it was like reading a great story! great write and keep up the good work
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soory but I have to diqualify this poem for, you entered this in my very fist contest, but you are free to enter a different poem.
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oops! guess I should check who's contests I'm entering! lol sorry about that!
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I feel like I have read this poem, but regardless it is still extremly sweet, what we'd all do for love like this.
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this is a sweet poem as always i love it.
"Two spirits mold to one
The hearts are sewn together
never to separate
always meant to be."
My favorite line.
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i love this one! it is way cute! well talk to you later!!love you!!
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Loved the ending lines in this, the nervousness of youth turning to the wonder of age and experience. Lovely.
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Awww the first, how pericous.
This is truly very lovely,
sweet and innocent, I remember those days well.
It seems like a life time ago.
I very much enjoyed your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Manyblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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