It's coming
Ever closer
I can't turn away
For the tide pulls at me
Dragging me down
Unwilling to relinquish its deadly hold
I’m dragged under
Bounced upon waves of despair
Unable to turn away
For fear and curiosity
Holds me tight
Making me watch
Yes maybe its true
Maybe this is what I want
I want to see the final end
I want to see how it will end
How it will feel
As I’m dragged down
Deep into the recesses of your mind
I want to turn away
Lord above, how I do
And yet I cannot move
No, for the tide pulls
Dragging me ever closer
And although my senses scream
Beg me to stop…
No, I cannot
For I must see it through
To the deadly end
Author notes
http://fantasyartdesign.com/3dgallery/a-digital/3D-images/x3d-art-galleryGrie/3d-art02-pioneers.htm
Written for an AP class, this picture was my inspiration
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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amazing picture, hey? I most of all liked the line, "Deep into the recesses of your mind"!! and I liked "Bounced upon Waves of Despair" . I get the feeling i would enjoy this more if it were being read out loud, for sure. Thanks for the criticism btw,
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Hajii! Wow!!!! Great interpretation (sp?)!!!! I love the way your words really connect with the picture. Great job!!!
Akasha
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