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Soul Shakedown

An unpeeled apple,
Though inside rotted,
May look as sweet,
If skin‘s unspotted,

But always there’s,
A subtle dint,
A bruised soft spot,
A sudden hint,

The crumbled lint,
On unspent dimes,
Reminds us of,
A gentler time,

When children’s laughter,
Reached the sky,
With all of nature’s
bonds untied,
When  nurture slowed us
in our lies,

I am not surprised
At the way things went,
But my compassion,
Came and went,

For those who splash on,
A snake’s scent,
Lie and await,
Their Hell’s relent,

They pull us down,
Into a hole,
Apathetic,
About their souls,

They figure they’re damned,
Well damn us too,
The moral fabric
Has come unglued

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