Love falls from the ashes
As my heart renders
Set aflame by the masses
In anguish do i weep
My tears set afly
Mind and body put to sleep
Wishing not for the day i say good bye
In spirit shall i wait
Heart broken
With hatred for what is fate
This fate; ever so cruel
Stripping away something so pure
Installing despare as my new fuel
Knowing there is no cure
If only to mend the aches in my soul
I wish for this love not to die in vain
Let it escape and not control
Away with the barriers of my heart that now coil
Still love thrives
Within this everlasting termoil
Only can my dear gothic angel end my cries
Author notes
Long ago i loved a girl. She had loved me in return. She broke my heart till the point i wanted to forget her. Yet my feelings inside could not ler her go.
A contest entry
- The Pages Of Your Soul by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended March 16, 2007, 15 entries
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i really like this poem.. keep writing and i know you have prolly heard this before, but time is the only cure for heartache.... im still waiting to heal too....
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Very beautiful and touching, did you write this in a journal in reality or is it something that came from the feelings in a journal? Just curious.
Great entry, thank you.
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thanks....
thanks for the comment and yes i actually wrote it out first in a journal just to get it all out. Then i just decided to make a poem out of it.
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