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Complete

Ivory curves,
crystalline with passion;
lie against bronzed essence.

Musky arousal,
midnight's aphrodisiac
to permeate sensual desires.

Copper tendrils
dancing against molten flesh;
cerise lips divide...
and conquer.
Feverish exploration,
body, mind, and soul.

Your golden embers
pulsating the honied canal;
shadowing love's luminescence.

Journey with me,
as one;
culminating in volcanic explosions.

Flood me in lust,
as I
drown you in desire...

complete.

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  • SoulWhispher
    March 2, 2007

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    Great poem, both sensul and hot and done with such good taste, you have doen a great job here, I have missed your poems, blessings John


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      March 2, 2007
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      Thank you John, I have missed writing. Hope I can get more of them out. Appreciate your comments hun.

      Storm

  • Heavenly Angel
    March 2, 2007

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    Wonderfully awesome sensual and sultry, my friend! You go, girl! Makes me long for that someone special
    Good to see your pen flowing again!
    All the best,
    Sandy

    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      March 2, 2007
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      It has been too long Sandy. And I had the beginning no problem, but relly had to work to get this completed. Glad you enjoyed.

      Storm

  • Angels Delight
    March 2, 2007

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    OMG

    I am rendered speechless and you know that doesn't happen often...My erotic side has lately been very dry and I am in need of some urgent inspiration...

    The image you created in my mind was beautiful, sensual and so damn HOT

    Where is my man when I need him

    Thanks for sharing

    Love ya always
    Tes


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      March 2, 2007
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      Thank you Tes. I do understand about the dry side. I have been suffering too. This is the first in a long while. Appreciate your words sweetie. Hope you can find your muse soon.

      Hugs
      Storm
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