I’m chained to your greed.
Alone I cry out,
Tortured and beaten I receive -
For all that I plea!
I explain to you that I’m not insane,
But my yells all fall in vain...
Now, no longer chained all alone
My brethren beside me let me now know -
No longer is it just “Me”
But rather, I am apart of “We”
Together we stand tall,
Then do we break free!
The world now belongs to us!
There is so much to see!
But what will become of us?
What shall we be?
Author notes
Either Option 9 or 7 I'm not sure which one
But it's about the idea of communism fighting back
A contest entry
- Pick! It's up to YOU! by redmarkonthewall.
525 points, ended March 6, 2007, 27 entries
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Awesome
Love it! Good structure and technique, thought invoking! Just love it! Well done! Thanks for entering and good luck!

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to be honest your username made me think about entering this poem
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Wow. Thats interesting, and new! lol I am glad you did enter.
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