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Together

I’m chained to your greed.
Alone I cry out,
Tortured and beaten I receive -
For all that I plea!
I explain to you that I’m not insane,
But my yells all fall in vain...

Now, no longer chained all alone
My brethren beside me let me now know -
No longer is it just “Me”
But rather, I am apart of “We”
Together we stand tall,
Then do we break free!

The world now belongs to us!
There is so much to see!

But what will become of us?
What shall we be?

Author notes

Either Option 9 or 7 I'm not sure which one
But it's about the idea of communism fighting back

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  • redmarkonthewall
    March 1, 2007

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    Awesome

    Love it! Good structure and technique, thought invoking! Just love it! Well done! Thanks for entering and good luck!