Empty fields,
deeply real,
when your not here,
an aching feel.
Unanswerable questions,
paradox for two,
possessed by your touch,
nothing I can do.
Twisted fate,
wrong time and place,
like Romeo and Juliet,
kiss loves face.
Surviving time,
surviving place,
surviving life,
and its u I taste.
Seduction, wanting, craving, animalistic, needing,
bleeding, screaming, shouting inside, here comes the tide,
waves come crashing like
I'm abt to die.
Heavens thunder, rumbling, tumbling,
dark clouds races by, I close my eyes,
make the world pause,
a big sigh.
Stars shine bright for us tonight,
the moon so large makes me blind.
I'll fight this fight but
if all else fails, I'll treasure
the you and I's of our unfairy tale.
In moonlight memories prevail
in the stormy days of when love sailed.
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
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525 points, ended March 6, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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As much as a hate Shakespeare and his plays such as Romeo and Juliet, I do like these lines:
"Twisted fate,
wrong time and place,
like Romeo and Juliet,
kiss loves face."
Nicely written. Good write I wish you luck in my contest and thanks for entering! -
deep. u really felt that way uh?
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