Every drop...
With every drop the pain of you fades...
The darker the blood the sweeter the taste...
So why is this blood so bitter...
Is it the fact that this blood is the result of the pain you cause me...
With every cut...
The more the memory of you fades...
The deeper I cut the more sleep I obtain...
But no matter how deep I cut...
The wounds you left on my heart seem to never stop burning me...
Do you enjoy seeing me do this to myself?
Is this why you continue to harm me in ways I can never do to myself?
With every cut...
I hope the pain that you caused me would fade...
And hopefully one day...
One sweet day...
I will make the final cut...
Which will release me from this broken body you have beaten so...
And set me free to a place...
Far...Far...
Away from you...
A contest entry
- Darkness by RudeGirlxSkaKid.
440 points, ended March 8, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark, Uplifting, Heartbroken, Whatever. by All u wanted me 2 b.
600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Depressing, Dark Love, Lust, Prewrites allowed! by KittieLyyn.
450 points, ended March 28, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain, Without Love. by La Tua Cantante.
425 points, ended April 13, 2007, 36 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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god chuckie, your poems are so depressing. this isn't exactly a bad thing. they're really good actually. could you maybe try writing something happy for once though? lol just kidding. your poems are great, and if they're truly about how you feel, well i'm glad you've found an outlet for your feelings, but a little worried at the same time. anyways, great write again.
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I told you what I think of this poem in a below comment, & I wish you good luck in my contest.
-La Tua. -
The pain and emotion was truly outstanding in this poem. Thanks for entering.
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wonderful poem. full of emotion and imagery. but i'm none to partial on the subject! luv ya charles!!!
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I really like this write,
So full of emotion, I wish I could have written something like this.
I really enjoyed reading it, it kept my attention.
Keep up with the good writing.
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WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
Wonderful poem, but so sad. You have opened you heart and penned so much emotion into this. I do hope that you one day find the peace that you seek.
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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such a sad, emotional write. hope everything gets better for you soon. great write.
wolf
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