I sit alone close by yet far
I leave these thoughts of him with you
This lustful thought keeps you my star
My envious blood turns red to blue
These jealous eyes turn shades of brown
His arms are those I wish I had
Your gentle voice keeps me around
How can my heart feel so bad?
Pressed up against the adjacent wall
Your sounds of passion I’ve always seen
Orgasmic screams his name you call
My envious thoughts are painted green
Author notes
The woman I've seen but not been able to touch. From a far she bates me.
In a list
A contest entry
- Come Get Me Pot of Gold by ennovy.
550 points, ended March 12, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
This is an excellent poem, you did a wonderful job here and I see why you won gold in this contest, I am surprised that I missed reading this one, it seems that your jealousy had a rainbow of colors, man that is some envy, she must have been some kind of woman, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Guess you don't remember me writing this to you? LOL!! Guess you can't remember everything
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This sounds like unreciprocated love to me.
It sounds like you are suffering.
Loved they way you set it out
Hugs onesugar
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The woman I couldn't get to and never thought to tell her. I figured she would feel my emotion or reject it all together. This was a way to add color to emotions. ~ mykey
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Beautiful Ryhming Pattern
You have done a wonderful job on the balance and flow of the poem. Sort of a green topic. Thank you for entering my contest....ennovy
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Did I ever tell you thank U?? I re-read a few and never remembered to thank you for the motivation. I'm loading up now
hugs & waves!!!
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