My paper heart is bleeding
and blood red, my tears are falling.
All alone I sit and wonder.
Hearing only crashing thunder.
Or is that my heart?
For you gave it such a start,
When you took my life away.
Oh believe me, you will pay.
All faith in men is gone from me.
What kind of woman, now, will I be?
I have lost my trust
because of your barbaric lust.
You took everything I had.
Never had I felt so truly bad.
You left me there in tears
all alone to deal with brand new fears.
I hope that someday you will see
just what you've done to me.
Author notes
About rape pretty much.. some can tell and some can't.
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Thanks for entering and good luck.
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It's true people deal with rape in different ways. Some never forget and let it consume their lives, yet some forgive their rapist (though most lay somewhere between these two extremes). Rapists don't tend to care what they've done til they have been punished or caught out by someone they may care for i.e their child, partner or parent (especially mother). I try and believe what comes around goes around, that's what my Mum's always taught me.
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excellent poem. shows lots of emotion...great job amazing poem. i like it(: <33. Thanks for entering
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Very very good...
.... Excellent. I loved this poem. The flow was amazing. You've really flowed the poem nicely and it wasn't choppy. The fears, the hurt, the anger, the whole thing was perfectly written. Thanks for putting this into my contest and good luck to you. Kassie -
for me you could have done without the rhyming. that my taste. but besides that the poem was powerful. i could see what you were talking bout. thats a good thing in writing when comeone can see what your talking bout. GREAT JOB.
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Wow, this so sad and tragic...beautifully flowing, filled with emotion....I can feel your pain. It makes me sad that anybody could make you feel like this.
Whyitt U xoxox
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