the alarmclockrings im in bed
i couldnt get up
i had to be fed
once my clothes were on I was out the door
to bad i got stuck
the door was a size 2*4
so i got out and ran out the back window
but her dad was waitin wit a 2*4
oh he beat me to the left he beat me to the right
that man beat me freakin butt all night
i guess it was my fault that a slept with her
on second thought a wept with her
after that beatin it was a crisis
that same very day i lost my license
so i couldnt drive
how would i eat
i guess id have to run in my bare feet
i thought back at this day still today
it was crazy at mcdonalds i didnt have to pay
but thats the only thing in my life that came free
believe me kids life aint easy
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This is great! The only thing I would suggest is cleaning up the grammar a bit. Other than that...Superb!
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