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Float

That's right, float
like a cork and paper clip.
Stay there forever in your watery
prison. Save people for
later, they will understand eventually.
No need to explain right now,
when you can't even tell yourself.
Lift up from gray days,
Touch what's real.
Make sense in a scattered mind.
Get help, talk it out.
Nothing happens, floating cork.

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