Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

color poetry

Black is the color of death and sorrow
Makes you feel as if there is no tomorrow


Yellow is the color of fun screaming and loud
Like children running wild in the swarm of a crowd

Blue is the color of oceans and lakes
It makes you feel as if you can't make a mistake

Red is the color of lies and deceit
Yelling and bashing and blood on the street

Green is the color of envy and hate
In the end jealousy takes over fate

Orange is the color of the sun and fall leaves
Someday it will be the color of peace

Purple is the color of passion
A love, for your lover with no distraction

Pink is the color of love and lust
The color that lets you have love with no question, no fuss

Gray is the color of cheat and confusion
The color that makes you feel as if there is no conclusion

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • shattered logic
    May 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Amazing, I loved this piece. The flow was perfect, the rhyme added to it, the wording was great.
    How you used the colors was perfect. I loved how you described the color then underneath that you described it to an even deeper meaning.
    I love this, it's one of my favorites that i have read today.
    This is just a great write!!!!