I wake up in the morning light,
I know why.
He is watching me sleep again.
His hot gaze on my bare shoulders,
his fingers tracing circles on my thigh.
I Love him.
I love mornings like this,
It's just us.
His lips are on my neck now,
soft kisses in the morning light.
I wish it would never end.
I Love him.
I know it will end though..
It always does.
Soon it will be time to go,
they will give us no peace until you're gone.
But right now you're mine,
and only mine.
The mornings are ours, so full of love and warmth.
Soft touches and deep kisses.
In the morning Light.
I Love him.
A contest entry
- Have Fun! by KissMeGoodnight.
490 points, ended March 23, 2007, 28 entries
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this is so sweet and beaustiful! i hope it's true and you really have someone to love...awesome write, thankyou for entering and good luck in my contest!!!
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It is very true, my own experience. Thank your for your kind comment, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
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I think the I love him work well at the end of each stanza
his fingers tracing circles on my thigh.
There is much to be said for the comunion of touch
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Thank you for reading and that bit of a spell check, I try but I don't always catch everything
I hope you enjoyed my poem!
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lovely! oh my goodness! i wish you the best!
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WOW!
youre a very talented writer. this made me think of romeo and juliet for a second. this is so detailed and i can imagin this happeing with me and my someone. its a very loving, and sweet poem. it put me in a dreamy sort of mood. great job! is this a true emotion? i hope so, everyone deserves a soul mate/lover
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Thank you very much for you compliments and yes this is very true, It is actually about the latest visit from my boyfriend. He lives to far away to see each other anytime we want so he spends weekends here sometimes. The day he has to leave is always the worst day.. but that morning is the best part of the weekend
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I Love it Baby, its... its amazing. I dunno how to describe it, I just cant think of nothin. I give it a 100,000 out of 10 I Love it Baby its AMAZING
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