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only you will i adore

[Verse 1]
So go on tell me what's been going on
I've been away from here far too long
The farther I got I just dreamed more and more
That one day soon I'd be coming home

Well now i'm here and I want to know
everthing and anything Just take it slow
Cause before I know it i'll be gone again
Just want to remember the good times while i can

It's been forever since I last saw your face
Walking to your house I pick up the pace
Just can't wait til i'm with you for always
Most of my time is spent counting the days

[chorus]
You are the key that unlocks heaven's door
Every second i spend with you I can't help but want more
You are everything that i've been looking for
You and only you will i adore

[verse 2]
The wind blows across the empty yard
Time for me to go don't wanna make it hard
don't wanna leave you here, whille i'm off there
Now your sitting on the front porch, eyes filled with tears

Everytime i step out that door, i die inside
Everytime i get in the car, you start to cry
Feeling week, yet I keep moving on
But my thoughts are still with you at home

I can't wait til I get back to you
Everyday gets harder to make it through
but soon i'll see you, we'll be toghether again
I really just can't wait til then

[chorus]
You are the key that unlocks heaven's door
Every second i spend with you I can't help but want more
You are everything that i've been looking for
You and only you will i adore

[bridge]
Now we will be together
always and forever
never will i leave you again
Thing will be better then they've ever been 

[chorus]
You are the key that unlocks heaven's door
Every second i spend with you I can't help but want more
You are everything that i've been looking for
You and only you will i adore
 


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  • SilverMoonFeathers
    September 7, 2007
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    oo who is this for Cam you have to tell me NOW you can't resist


  • DrownInImperfection
    July 2, 2007
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    please add the option number in the author's notes box.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 29, 2007

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    You are the key that unlocks heaven's door

    i love that line. thank you for sharing this with me. and congratulations on the gold. viyanna rosemarie


  • tiffydawn08
    March 29, 2007
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    EXCELLENT

    I love this poem it makes me think of my bf going off to college and i really love this...do you have ne music for it? if you ever make it into a song u need to send it to me to listen to...i would really appreciate it...so far this is the best one in the contest but i have only read 3.....lol good luck and thanks for entering


  • okadadokie
    March 20, 2007

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    Very nice song/poem. I really like it. All that's left is a tune or melody to go with the words. Great job. Good luck.
    ~Oka

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