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On the Road

On the road
We travel relentlessly,
With our destination, that is uncertain.

Fugitives to our home –
Our hearts pushes the pedal
Yet our minds, will hit the break.

We’re wandering rebels:
Without any goals to follow,
Yet we happen to find ourselves –

On the road

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short poems
(First of 2 poems I've written for this contest, the other being "Untapped Potential")

A contest entry

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  • silverscent gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Liked the repetition of "on the road." It was simple and to the point, creating an interesting message. Thanks for entering.