Piercing green eyes are looking
It gives someone a sense of worry
Especially when life has taken her
Right to a place of constant turmoil
Crying is over and now its total envy
I've never seen a look like that before
Now the fear has etched into her skin
Glaring white, and no hope for any change
Gripping onto to reality, the breathing's hard
Right now, there's a sadness and anger revealing
Each breath has taken one moment of life away
Everything seems to be gone, especially her hope
Now piercing green eyes are looking for solace
Especially when at one time, she was vibrant
Yes, full of love and with that happiness
Everything, as it goes with life, changes daily
So piercing green eyes, are now looking at you
A contest entry
- Who is this woman??? by Sweetangelgrace.
450 points, ended March 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, this poem really touched me, you have an excellent way of well wording your words and very descriptive. Poems are all about feelings and emotions and conveying them. this poem does just that, you did a great job.
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~ -
Well this is strangely haunting and familiar but I guess that is because I have green eyes, so it feels personal lol, it's a beautiful write nonetheless and I enjoyed reading it.
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Ahhh!!
I love this!! Awesome awesome job!!!
And I really wish I had green eyes now..haha.
angie -
Very good...
You did a good job of describing what is in the picture for this contest...
Great write...
and good luck in the contest.
Heidi
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