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Weighing Me Down

weighing me down
cutting me off
from my friends
from my family
eating away my soul
till I can't feel anything
but this hopelessness
this loneliness
this pain

weighing down on me
driving me deeper into my shell
where I can only hear
the voices in my head
telling me the lies
that take me deeper
till I fall in despair
unable to stand
and carry this cross

the lies telling me
they don't care
that they can't understand
and I believe them every one
I still try to fight against them
but this fight is weighing me down
and in the darkness
no one hears
my cries for help

Author notes

I don't know why I wrote this I had a really upbeat poem I was going to write earlier today but sometimes I just get really depressed and...

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