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Poor Plucking

She loves me, loves me not
This daisy's not so hot

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An Essence."short poems"

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  • silverscent gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Maybe I missed the point, but this seemed TOO short to portray or conclude anything. Did the daisy only have two petals? Thanks for entering though.


  • azure85 gold member
    March 1, 2007
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    Oh, this is short! Try another posey, I know she loves you!