She gave you her love
She gave you her trust
You split her heart open
And turned it to dust
Not eating, not sleeping
Just dying inside
Broken and shattered
She wanted to hide
You gave her sorrow
And you gave her pain
How can she ever trust you again
Crying alone over love lost
She loved you so deeply
But look what it cost
She goes through her days
The best that she can
Trying to cope, and understand
How you can love
Then just walk away
Why with her heart did you just play.
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option 3
A contest entry
- Heart Broken by SensualWhispers.
425 points, ended March 6, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice...
Flow.. Excellent write. I loved the way this poem really worked and flowed. The rhythm of them poem is good too. The meaning and depth behind your poem is outstanding. Excellent work. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. Kassie -
Damn this is full of real emotions of having a heart broken and it flowed wonderfully very well penned
Bravo
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thankyou for your lovely comment
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Another good write. Yeah, I sometimes wonder why it seems so easy to some people to crush others.
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yes its an age old question my friend, thankyou for dropping by, a pleasure as always
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So tearful
This is the kind of poem that makes you want to cry. It is very effective. Good luck in the contest.
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thankyou for your wonderful comment ..you always know how to make a girl smile
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