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Night and Day - A linked cinquain

The sun
plunges below
the ocean horizon
haloing the grey-black streaked clouds
with gold.

Next day
the eastern sky
waits, above blue-grey hills,
the rising sun's pink, red, orange
tinges.

Author notes

short poems

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  • silverscent gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Lovely and bright imagery in this. You used many colour references and that made it a vivid write; good in terms of show, don't tell. Thanks for entering.