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all the pain in the world

i am feeling all the pain in the world
verification of his true feelings
he saw - he judged - he left
so what if i am not beautiful
is anyone truly perfect?

he tries to make it all my fault
he agreed to it
is it my fault i fell in love?
but it is his fault he lied
he never loved

my life has taken a new turn
it may not be where i want it to be
but i have to make do cuz he left
he blames it all on me
but he lied too

im so tired of this
i just want to cut
i want 2 cut
im gonna cut
i have 2 cut

no one will notice
no one will care
no one looks at me
no one feels me
no one loves me

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  • FantasyDreams
    March 2, 2007
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    I understand the pain and sorrow you put into this poem! I know exactly how it feels to be lost and alone...lied to and used...hurt and broken! Only finding comfort in the pain of cutting! This poem is really good and expresses my exact feelings right now!