I was hungry, so I grabbed a piece of cheese.
It said "Don't eat me!" and said "Please!".
I gave it a nickel,
And a dill pickle.
And the nickle bought another pickle so he said "Agree."
You likey?
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I like dill pickles
I wish I had dill pickle right now. Cause school is definatly less cool than your poem. Cheese is nice too btw you should have eaten both of them.


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Halarious
This poem is about as funny as you fighting with alice in the chat good write keep it up


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nice comparison. i like it 2
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funny
wow i really liked this
short and simple
i some times write like this

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wow...i guess it was pretty good. short and simple. i try to keep my poems that way, but it doesnt seem to work sometimes...lol
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