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Dill Pickle

I was hungry, so I grabbed a piece of cheese.
It said "Don't eat me!" and said "Please!".
I gave it a nickel,
And a dill pickle.
And the nickle bought another pickle so he said "Agree."

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  • UrbaN PlaguE
    March 20, 2007

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    I like dill pickles I wish I had dill pickle right now. Cause school is definatly less cool than your poem. Cheese is nice too btw you should have eaten both of them.


  • The Rose God Ororon
    March 3, 2007
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    Halarious

    This poem is about as funny as you fighting with alice in the chat good write keep it up


  • Brett08
    March 3, 2007
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    funny

    wow i really liked this
    short and simple
    i some times write like this

    • Jeg Elsker Ost
      March 4, 2007
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      wow...i guess it was pretty good. short and simple. i try to keep my poems that way, but it doesnt seem to work sometimes...lol

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