In our favorite darkness
Kissing every part of you
I will seduce you with oral caresses
There is a decadent hunger that must be fed
A craving not to be denied
Desires that must be satisfied
I breathe in your essence
Slowly touching you
Stimulating your mind
Teasing your body
Arousing your senses
Touching, exploring, tasting
Feeling your intimate muscle
throbbing to be satisfied
My abundance of wetness
providing a slippery entrance
into my sensual furrow
sharing my secrets inside
Senses heightened by loves fragrance
Feeling your love through every pore
as we fuse together in orgasmic bliss
We are lost and consumed in passion
This is our moment
Time does not exist
As darkness wraps our bodies,
We sleep
In a list
- Erotic Desires group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Contest: Love & Erotica by silent bee.
425 points, ended March 5, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, is this HOT!!!
Very sensual and passionate, my friend!
Whew!
Congratulations on the silver with this one! Much deserved as this just is fiery hot!
All the best to you! -
Wowzers!!
A very inviting piece You have penned which stimulates the Mind also the senses into overdrive
Love the last line but also the beginning~
with the words:...intimate muscle...
now that gives many images
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!!
-throws confetti-
Woooooooooooo Hooooooooooooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing!
Best wishes to You in all You do
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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*Tries to catch breath but just can not manage* Oh...my...God!!!! Where do I start?! The imagery was some of the best I've ever seen...wew...wish I was there...oh sorry I got distracted...the word usage...*sighs* amazing is all I can say and the flow was excellent! This poem just took me away and I have yet to get back!!! Excellent write!!!!
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Very sensual sis....heightened an acute aware ness to all my senses as i read...this is done in a classy way...almost romantic...lovin the background....good job, good luck! hmmm....
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into my sensual furrow
sharing my secrets inside
wow what lines you ahve penned beautiful a defo trophy in this contest in my eyes
laura xxx -
This is very, very good. I have tried to write a critique for this piece several times and decided each time I don't know what I am talking about, highlighted and erased it. So I will leave it at that. Is it me or does that pic look painful? Three bunnies for you!!
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all i have to say is WOW. i love this piece. so beautiful and powerful! great job. thank you so much for entering the contest and best of luck to you!
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So very dreamy, steamy. Double
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Quite the picture this is - and a lovely poem to accompany it. Great presentatiaon with the colours and the columns as well. Good flow, vivid images and wonderful ending too.
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