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Really

Finding the rhymes in my mind to say
lightning striking a blinding blaze
I'm flying in the sky riding flames
the suns in your eyes
but I'm on the rays.

Raised up high
to
  fall
on the page
Fighting fire
with fire that likes the rain.

We'll burn brighter than the brighest day,
and if you think I'm a liar, I got something to say,
I'm not lion, I'm tiger, and I'll eat your face.

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  • autumns rising
    March 1, 2007
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    lol. cute ending. but overall good imagery and rhyme. this madde me feel all warm inside. good job Jason. I really liked this part
    "lightning striking a blinding blaze
    I'm flying in the sky riding flames"