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Blue Cheese

I was hungry, so I grabbed some cheese.
It was blue, so a random guy teased.
I said it was yellow,
But alas, he said, the young fellow,
"I'm colourblind, forgive me, please?"

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This is kinda a poem I wrote when I was bored. So...um...ENJOY!

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  • The Rose God Ororon
    March 13, 2007

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    uhhh?????

    uhhh lol nice you have a very interesting way of writing I like it keep it up....p.s. Alice loves you she saiys hi.....^.^


  • lingonberries
    March 9, 2007

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    "I'm colourblind, forgive me, please?" This was a good one... It's not that often poems make me smile, but hey you did it! Good job!