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Hopeless

Everything's so messed up
'S all going haywire
And I'm sitting here
'Lone in the mire

Nothing makes sense
I can't think straight
Got this feeling
That none can relate

Emotions churning
Thoughts incoherent
Fear, confusion, anger
Only those apparent

So much unfairness
Something we need to do
Such is injustice
What's the world coming to?

Friends betraying friends
In total disregard
Uncaring of feelings
Making trust so hard

'Tis a world of no love
Only personal gain
No care for others
Ignorance of our pain

Sitting here watching
Gotta say something
No one's listening
Ignoring everything

Merely existing
Feeling so helpless
In a dying world
So utterly hopeless

Please tell me what you think

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  • Tangles
    March 1, 2007

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    Pretty good. It was a little rough toward the end buto ther than that, it was a good write.
    Keep it up girlie

    • angelic1
      March 5, 2007
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      yep, that was just venting some stress lol i really didn't care how it went, i just wrote til nothing else came. but thanks for the comment