I'm broken,
He's spoken.
I'm Dying,
while Crying.
We're split,
No fire lit.
In pain,
I have lain.
Is it really over?
Author notes
Look..I know it ain't the best I can do, but its what I got right now. Recently, I was dumped. This is my heartbreak. I still can hardly believe it...but one thing that I can be proud of, is that I haven't cried. He ain't gonna make me cry, the cowardly bastard that he is.
There, I've bared my soul...are you happy now, or should I start anew?
A contest entry
- Heart Broken by SensualWhispers.
425 points, ended March 6, 2007, 33 entries
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i love how when a couple is together they love eachother and stuff and then when they break up they want the other person to hav a fucked up life... ive had a lot of break ups in my time. i can relate.
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Is it wrong of your current boyfriend to feel bad for you, for what your ex did to you? As you said to me, I'm sorry that you had to go through it, but in the end we found each other and are there for each other.
Love,
Your Redneck Brain Drained Punk -
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I'm sorry to hear you were recently dumped.I know the feeling all to well. Sometimes the pain can't be expressed for awhile. you'v done a great job though. My heart goes out to you. May you find happiness soon. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. Kassie
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