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Why's My Heart Breaking?

Why's my heart breaking? I thought it was through
When the friendly masks vanished and trust went poof.
I thought it was finished when I said "forget you!"
And stomped off to sulk in my room.

I thought I was independent,
Self-sustained, I thought

My bridges were toppled
When you and you and you said
Good-
Bye.
I thought I was alone. I
Didn't see I...

I guess I was wrong.

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  • MischiefMayhemSoap
    April 9, 2007

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    it gets smaller as it nears the end. Also, the mood seems to change. Like... from chicken soup book excerpt to emo song? I like that... it's cool. I reeeally like the last line for some reason...