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Green Eyed Beauty

into forever she stares
never blinking  blank expression
having said her evening prayers
with no thought of regression

green eyed beauty
her heart shining in her eyes
she will always do her duty
knowing always she is the prize

knowing that her life’s not hers
it belongs to another
freedom is something she prefers
always she is controlled by others

submit she will, she knows no other way
it is her lot in life to be another’s toy
she bows her head to pray, yet she must stay
in her prayers she finds her joy

it’s time to go they’ve called her name
she stands head bowed a prayer is said
stepping quietly in her shame
she know what lies ahead

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  • Sweetangelgrace
    March 1, 2007

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    I loved this poem made me stop and think...Something I felt inside me when I read this poem ;iI felt someone saying me to stand and face the life as it comes to me.This felt like a ray of light in a very dark place.This poem reached out to me. it really talks about what i feel underneath.
    A lot of wisdom and experience in this poem! The poet succeeds in describing so many ordinary life experiences we all can relate to and shows that each is valuable, from each one can learn. Bravo! Well done

    Good luck in my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~