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Poetic Emotion

Enhanced by short sweet poems for which reality grabs the mind into beauty of hate,

Love and my emotional expression is the talent of so few and many yet power

Must enhance beauty if so maybe life is on the edge of fate, yet fate is also

Mind capturing destiny for those who seek sunsetting waves ever so

Orange of love but to describe what poetic emotion must follow

Every emotional image maybe dark shadows which follows

The moon-lighted field of wolves will swing the sun off

Balance, which does this not describe emotion of

Dark expression  maybe you prefer love sense

Image of two unfailing destiny's by a shore

Of sand which love remains untouched

By those who stand in darkness

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  • silverscent
    March 4, 2007

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    The line format was creative.
    The first few lines especially were a little wordy to read, unfortunatly, but it got easier as the poem carried on.
    Thanks for entering.