Once you start,
You don't want to stop,
Once you bleed,
You don't want to cover it up,
Once you get away with it,
You want to do more until you get caught,
Once you get deep enough,
You smile and say,
"I'm going to die today"
........................SUICIDE..........................
When I cut,
My whole body is numb,
The blood driping on the floor,
People thinking...............
"God why are you so dumb",
........................SUICIDE..........................
When I cry,
I don't wipe away my tears,
People wonder, WHY?
I say.............
Why wipe away tears,
When they need to be shed,
........................SUICIDE..........................
Cutting is a repeating cycle,
Once you start,
It's hard to stop,
And if you did,
Theirs always the scars to remind you,
Of the life back in the past,
That your life was once blue,
As soon as you take the knife,
Your misery finally gone at last,
........................SUICIDE..........................
I cut to survive,
I cut to know I'm alive,
I cut to see my wrist bleed,
I cut to hear my scream,
I cut to hurt people I hate,
I cut so I won't make another mistake.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW!
I absolutely love this. It's completely and totally amazing. Well written, seriously. I can relate on such a deep level. This part in particular hit me hard:
"I cut to survive,
I cut to know I'm alive,
I cut to see my wrist bleed,
I cut to hear my scream,
I cut to hurt people I hate,
I cut so I won't make another mistake."
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that was really nice. this is alot like me, and it is just incredable
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I love the last stanza! i mean, i like the whole poem but the last stanza and then the last line is so powerful. I can really kind of relate to this, and i don't think it's gruesome. Amazing. xx
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OMFG
I love this poem....Its so Great -
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lovely i must say! simply beutiful. i disagree with redhead08. be as gruesome as you need to!!! sometimes thats the best way to express and it holds lots of emotion. though not all the time (but a lot of it) anywayyy i love the way you structured this poem. its so fun to read ^_^ and quite true at that. have you gone through this? because you can rele feel emotion. thumbs up =]
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Great
That is exactly right. This is a great poem and you should keep writing more just not as gruesome
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