little bits of drop-down heaven
landing in a hollow of palmy earth
wind has much to answer for
brittle broken wail
silenced by pound-down rain
a woman can not cry quietly
little bits of drop-down heaven
landing in a hollow of palmy earth
wind has much to answer for
brittle broken wail
silenced by pound-down rain
a woman can not cry quietly
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A contest entry
- Enter whatever you think I will like by elemental angel.
500 points, ended March 4, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, a very powerful piece. Silenced by pound down rain that really struck a chord with me. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest
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I love rain actually....and it was rainign when I wrote this....aw, spring is coming.
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Wow this is superb and powerful message within the most wonderful box. I enjoyed this very much.
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Actually, I miss my homeland chinook's that often bring the pound-down spring rain. ty for commenting pen friend.
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This to me is a very thought provoking poem which has meaningful depth to its content. A very fine piece of poetry. Well done and thankyou for sharing.
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thank you blueskymorning.....it is a beautiful day here today...mmm, spring is in the air.
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This suits me perfectly, absolutely perfectly today.
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thank you pen friend..... yes, today is very balmy and kind of moistness to the air....
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