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Heart Broken

Heart Broken
I regret my mistake more and more each day
For all those words I never got to say
You left too soon and my words, unspoken
Leave my heart feeling so bruised and broken
Torn in two, my feelings left unsaid
Are constantly spinning around my head
They`re causing such a tremendous ache
Threatening to make my heart break
If you give me a chance to say what`s on my mind
Maybe then my tensions will finally unwind
You left me standing there, hurting for more
All our notes are locked away in my drawer

I still wonder how my life would be changed
If you were still here, would it all be rearranged
Would my plans run smoothly or fall to the gutter
I would scream the words that I could barely mutter
I Love You! I need you, with me, by my side
To help me dry up the tears that I cried
I`m sorry I never told you how much you meant to me
I just thought I had a little more time, don`t you see
I never realized you`d be gone so fast
I still can`t help it; looking into the past
You were my only, my reason to stand tall
You never pushed me down, you`d help me when I`d fall

You were the one who could make my day bright
Without you now, nothing seems right
I guess you never knew you meant all this to me
I love you so much, my Boo, you`ll always be
But now you`re gone, what can I do
Who`s going to be there for what life puts me through
Who's going to be there when times get rough
Who`s going to be there when I need someone tough
Who`s shoulder will I lean on when I need to cry
You`re the only one I want; you`re my guy
But now all my words will be forever left unspoken
Because I`m Living With A Heart, Broken

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  • AngelEyes13
    March 7, 2007
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    Wow! I love this poem! It's exactly how I feel! I wish I could have said it this well though! You would have won first place if only you had put Love Bites in the author box. Sorry but I have to DQ you. I'm soo sory, this is such a good poem.


  • Robert Rumery
    March 1, 2007
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    that was awesome.

    Very emotional. I loved the wording!