Mother dear,
I love you so,
This is something,
You will never know.
A love so deep,
Only with you I can share,
I want you to know,
How much I really care.
We fight a lot,
We cause a lot of strife,
I'm sorry about that,
I guess it's part of life.
Mother dear,
You taught me to care,
Now that I've learned,
With you I will share.
You're so important to me,
Without you I'm lost,
I'll do anything to keep you safe,
I'll pay any cost.
I want to make you feel loved,
Like you have a place in my heart,
You always have mother,
From the very start.
I want to know your dreams,
I want to know your thoughts,
I want to fill your heart,
In all those empty spots.
Most of all,
I want you to know,
I love you so much,
and forever that will show.
You mean so much to me,
I care for you so much,
I love to hear your voice,
and feel your loving mother's touch.
You need to be pampered,
and loved like a mother should,
If I could give you everything,
I definitely would.
A contest entry
- My Beloved Mother by okadadokie.
500 points, ended March 5, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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This is by far the best mother poem I have ever read. It's emotional, it's heart filling. And it has great flow and rhyming. Thank you. Good luck.
~Oka

