i sit here wondering,
looking at the sky,
my mind racing a million miles a seccond,
why cant i escape this?,
look at me and tell me what do you see,
beauty?,
strengh?,
happiness?,
but im none of the above,
ill tell you what you dont see,
the tears that are just begging to fall,
this heart thats shattered to a million pieces,
who i really am!,
if only you would listen to the sound of my voice,
its so full of fear, so easy to tell,
but you wouldnt know,
so look deep inside me, and try to understand,
would u still see me in the same way you do now?,
one day i wish to be seen for who i really am,
insted of this lie im living,
Author notes
i reall hope you enjoy this
A contest entry
- Who is this woman??? by Sweetangelgrace.
450 points, ended March 7, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Awwwww!!!Left me speechless... How can I tell you what I felt inside?
Sometime in everyone's life, they feel all alone, like everything is a lie. WE are trapped in a world of anger and rage and we can only see red through our eyes. No one seem to see when we are going through this time, or understand why..
But it's better to release our emotional sides, put the words on paper about all the pain and suffering a person goes through...
I do alot of poetry myself but this poem hit it right on the dot. This poem says it all..it's very touching touching! i love the style it is written in and how you can tell the author really got into writing her poem with the amazing details!
but you've got to remember God is always with us & is not going to make us go through life on our own.
Wish you love , ligh, peace and pleasure...
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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