I just can't seem
to stop crying
I can't stop
the pain that I feel
I feel alone
I feel useless
I feel like nothing matters
I feel like I'm dead
Am I going insane?
There's nothing to keep me sane
Am I going to be ok?
There's no one to tell me I'm ok
Memories are flashing
through my mind
They make me cry
even more and more
It feels like I'm
falling apart
It feels like I'm
slowly dying
I hate feeling like this
but I have no choice
I have nothing in life anymore
It'd be nice to give up
Missing the memories
Missing my friends
Missing my old life
Missing the old me
Back when I was happy
I spent time with my friends
Back when I had fun and was happy
every single day
Now, I'm never happy
I never spend time with my friends
I never have fun
Every single day I'm alone
Author notes
I hope this is good for your contest. Its how I feel right now.
A contest entry
- I want you to make me feel it! by unanswered.
450 points, ended March 7, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this reminds me so much of myslef at the moment... this would have to be the best poem on here...keep up the good work ...
Caycee(.♥.)
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Great.
Hey man this is great. It really is. I understand you completely on this & i know exactly how you feel. I'm sorry that you feel this way but hey life goes on right....♥
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This is an emotional and sad poem you wrote, I can sympathize with what you are going through at one time or another we have all felt the same way you did. Well written
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thank you for entering the contest and good luck. I enjoyed this. good job
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ull get through it hun, i did
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