Being involved in other poets lives
Takes a lot of patience and time,
Comments, stars, and reviews
Looking for that perfect rhyme
You must be eager and very creative
Roam around daily on the site,
Click and read and type
And comment on what fellow poets write
Be considerate and be supportive
Go on, let your mind just roam free,
Make friends, use your imagination
Appreciate our poetic family
Author notes
I shall be your new mother, since mine are out of the house! Sorry, this oneis older, and no big words, but I felt it perfect for you!!!!!! POETDONTKNOWIT
A contest entry
- He Ain't Hippy, He's My Brother - For My Favorite MuddyKing by CarolDesjarlais.
1000 points, ended May 16, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Become a part of my AP Family :) - PREWRITES ALLOWED by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
550 points, ended November 30, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 189th Contest by Tarja.
400 points, ended February 1, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - We R Family! by Abidoodle.
600 points, ended February 12, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Adding to my family and meeting new poets!!! by SummerlandRayne.
479 points, ended June 22, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so sweet! Encouraging kindness and sweetness to others! Family is so nice to have...and sharing our poetry is a great blessing...! I will take you as Mother...yet I am almost the same age...
! I am just proud to welcome you to my family and begin reading your poems and thoughts! Thank you sooooo much!
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Congrats on the honorable mention. This was an interesting piece and I thank you for entering. Good luck.
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Hi there I am just judging contest now. I have someone I am placing in as a winner and mother
sorry lol
But you shall be an honourable mention
So please let me know what other spot you would like be it an aunty or sister etc etc
again im sorry
Cin -
Thanks for adding in author notes .
As I said, it is perfectly fitting for the comp and thats why I am happy to consider it.
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It's not really what I aksed for, but with this one I shall forgive as it portrays the message so well. It speaks of exactly what I am looking for. It describes this site so well So for that reason It will be considered as an entry along with all the others
This was an inspiring write to read. I hope many many others see it and gain the inspiration I did
Could you please though, put into your author notes which family member you would like to be, if you win
Thank you and Good Luck
Cindy
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You know, this needs featuring. That is exactly how to build community. So many say they do not get comments and do not have mentors. If they only took the time to really study and get to know other poets on the site, they will ahve more comments than they know what to do with. ty for this entry.
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Be considerate and be supportive
Go on, let your mind just roam free,
Make friends, use your imagination
Appreciate our poetic family
I applaud these words. They are very true. I feel you have the wrote the truth. We are a family a team we apart of assisting others to grow for the better. It makes my heart sing joys of gladness. To see other positive comments about us as a community of writers who share a common goal the love and passion of the written word. The love and passion for people. We all have gifts to give. Each comment is a gifts of friendship given to others. I am sorry for being so long winded it makes me happy to see this write. Thanks so much for writing it I needed to see something special today. Thank you -
What a lovely piece of encouragement for all. Well done. Thanks for the entry.
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Cool
I love the title, i always liked that song.i thought this was a great way to exspress the feelings and the goings on with APoetry.Takes alot of patients and time.
comments, stars, and reviews.checking out feature poems, reward poems. and contest along the way.I really like the title it's cool and catchy.draws one in.i think the first and last line are appropriate.and very true.i enjoyed this poem.I joined here because a freind mentioned it.her and i both love poetry. she read my work and told me to go join.i'm very glad I did.Lovely comments and new friends I even got a freind to join.
so keep on writing my friend.
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I like it a lot
yes well what else could i say after reading this... really these are words to keep in mind; encouragement ...very well written a very creative effort ...PK
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Damn good!!!
This poem is a jewel to behold for all who write here at all poetry.. This is one of those writes that makes you say "damn it why didnt i think of that". love every thing about this write and hope you get spotlighted! thanks for sharing and once again i loved this write!
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Very well said, what we all do on this site. We are one big family, and some we know better than others, some we get along with better than others. Great flow, rhythm and rhyme with sentiments well expressed in these lines. Easy to read and understand too.
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Most beautiful
Marvelous write and so true. Thank my friend for giving me a good firm slap in my face, for I have been a very bad girl and have spent much of my value write time writing something I should have never have let go so long. This is another one of those ESPish moments I really getting a little goose pimply now. Are you keeping tabs on my computer or what? This poem is perfectly worded, the flow of words is great, ect. I must also say this poem is very timely. Have you read "Did you have somebody!" yet. I not please do! or at least, the comments after the poem.
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