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A beautiful angel

you are so beautiful
That I have to make
myself believe of
what my eyes see

Please tell me what you think

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  • Tempa Lee
    March 1, 2007

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    short and nicely written. it seems like you see someone but don't want to approach that person so you look for afar. nicely done. return the favor.

    ~Dani~


  • troyias silver member
    March 1, 2007

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    Lovely

    Is this about your bride. wonderful and emotion filled

    Great job.

    *Go with God* my nephew

    Aunt Valerie *rose


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 1, 2007

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    lol, you know this is a good line, i think i may use it one day, this was a nice piece, keep it flowing and i promise not to use it so much it becomes a cheesy pick up line