Please tell me you’re ok
And mean it when you say it
Don’t die tonight
Don’t die tonight
I see your face and I see your scars
Why does he have to hurt you like this?
He pushed you to that point
And for what reason?
Please tell me you’re ok
And mean it when you say it
Don’t die tonight
Don’t die tonight
(Don’t die tonight)
Even if he doesn’t care, we do
I don’t wanna have to be at your funeral this early
Playing your song
If you’re going
I’m coming after you
I need you to throw out those pills
That’s your cause of death
Your overdose
Please tell me you’re ok
And mean it when you say it
(Don’t die tonight)
Even if he doesn’t care, we do
I don’t wanna have to be at your funeral this early
Playing your song
Please tell me you’ll be fine
And mean it when you say it
Ill be alive tonight
Author notes
i did this oone for my best friend whos going through a very hard time right now...
A contest entry
- Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Thoughts on Death,Dyeing,The Paranormal & The Fourth Demension Hypothosis by LovinCharmer.
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315 points, ended April 2, 2007, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you for sharing these lyrics with me and congratulations on the bronze trophy you have earned in this contest. viyanna roseamarie
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this is a very lovley poem
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very touching poem...straight to the point!!! I connected easily to your lyrics because my friend is also experiencing a tough time right now...and I know your poem would uplift her spirit when she read it...hope that you also uplift queen black rose in your poem...good luck to you in this contest!
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very good lyrics very just wow....
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I like it and I kinda did this thing awhile back so I can kinda relate. Its very touching and I hope your friend isnt stupid enough to do that. Overall I think this was just a "real" and "emotional" piece, and just so you know that means this was great and I wish you luck in the contest
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I know the feeling. My best friend is going through a lot right now, and she won't talk to me. It's horrible. Nice job, good luck in the contest! -
awwwww sorry that your friend is going through a rough time and he/she is really lucky to have you. This is really good and i can re-late alot. I hope that your friend will be alrite.......
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