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Broken

Boy, you’re broken
Tears fill your eyes
And what you say
Makes the world stand still
You need love

Boy, you’re alone
You say you’re ok
But I know that you’re not
You don’t need to hide the truth
Im here for you

Take my hand
Live while you can
Let me be your angel
And take you on a dream
Take you away from reality

Boy, when you cry
Does your spirit die?
When you shout
Is your heart strung out?
When you fall
Do you lose it all?
When you scream
No one notices at all…


You’re slipping away
You’re losing control
Losing the battle
You’re starting to fall
Spiralling down
Hitting the ground
Something’s gonna give
You’re losing the will
To live…

Boy, undone
Not long now

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  • April 26, 2007
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    OMG!!! Did you write this poem just for me???


  • CazzieJade
    March 1, 2007
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    This poem made me cry when I read it on Facebox..
    I'm like awwwww It's cute