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Humble Angel...

Bad times were the order of my days
Like never ending tales of pains to say
Subtle thoughts seemed a burden to hold
My confused mind felt fragile and old
Little dreams seemed too far and hard
Life just beginning to tear apart
No matter how bold and willed I try
Nothing stopped my tearful eyes to cry
Though I had not been left all alone
A few friends spoke in compassioned tone
One question came by my heart all the while
Why of me in the world without a smile?
Watching the star that one night
As if looking for death if I sight
But then did the my cell ring again
She gently wispherd are you still in pain

As you feel your heart heavy and broken

So do I my love but we are not the one chosen

To be happy forever,we are decieved by fate

You are like dried orchids and  I, a cursed ornate...

And these were her last words in my ears

Cherised and yearned for all this years

So didi I learn my life had just begun

The hardway tho' to shine on like the sun...

 

 

 



 

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  • Tempa Lee
    March 1, 2007

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    nicely written. i hope you win. but i got a question...did you enter my contest NEED AN AP BOYFRIEND?

    ~Dani~


  • troyias silver member
    March 1, 2007

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    So sad

    This is beautifully written and expressed, so full of painful emotions. lovely and painful at the same time.

    *Go with God*

    Aunt Valerie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 1, 2007

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    i a speechless, ths was just so good, you have done a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Sweetangelgrace
    March 1, 2007

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    Hmmm..Crying, crying, crying!!!This is something sad and personal to the author...
    This poem is really truthful, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can relate to every word that was written.
    We have a true friend, an earth angel that we can say will always be there with our shoulder to lean on or just to listen no matter what.
    So thanks for sharing your poem with us!

    Good luck in my contest!

    ~¨GRACE~~


    • sunnystar
      March 1, 2007
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      Thank you so much

      Thank you for the comments they really mean a lot

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