A pastel candy glow
Of daydreams washing over the shadows
Daffodil light skips across the waters
And sweeps across the sky
The waves rock softly
Whispering as they splash playfully
Tickling the shore
Shadows once lurked in these coves
Hiding within the deepest crevices
When hope was lost at nightfall
But dawn bursts through once more
Light emerges and melts the darkness
Kissing each shadow with sunshine
Like the waves kiss each sand grain
Washing away mistakes written in the sand
I peak though my silky curtains
Filled with a soft tender glow
As I leave the past behind
To start a new day
Author notes
I'm out of my dark mood for awhile.
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, Yea!!!
This is so softly beautiful. I love the use of daffodil light, perfect for the time of day.
BUddy
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Wonderful
This is really beautiful! You always write so well. This is a very heart warming peice. As I was reading I was imagining the picture above and I felt warmth in my heart. Wonderful write once again. I tip my hat to you.
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there is great imagery in the wording of this poem, beautifully worded, wonderful view, and well written to the picture... I love the first verse, it really sets the scene...I love the description of the sun rising during the new morn, fabulous... these are my favourite lines...
"Kissing each shadow with sunshine
Like the waves kiss each sand grain
Washing away mistakes written in the sand"
beautiful, well done!!!
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wow!
This is really great and I feel inspired by this poem. Beautiful!
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i love the imagery. the way you used the light to describe your feelings. it's absolutely beautiful. i felt so encouraed after reading this. great job.
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yes, you definatly are out of your darkness...this poem is a kyoot little expression of the "every day is a new beginning" idea that is so commoly spoken but not always really believed...sounds to me like you believe it
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