The burning desire to inflict pain
to make you feel the wound so deep
determined to utterly drive you insane
haunt your dreams while you’re asleep
It’s not my choice, this venom within
I never wanted to feel such hate
I’ve been trough hell again and again
attempting an impossible fate
Hear me when I say this now
I loved you more than you were able
I can’t take back my heart you stole
I should have known you were unstable
Why is it that you never saw
my desire for you in my eyes
I held no secrets, you knew all
but now inside, my cold heart dies
Look what you’ve done
You’ve ripped me apart
and you knew you would
From the very start
I tried so hard to make it work
Even when things failed
but you turned into such a jerk
your true self now unveiled
Leave me now but keep in mind
I took a risk not all would take
You’ll look but you will never find
my love you so chose to forsake
Author notes
Inside her heart is breaking...
A contest entry
- Heart Broken by SensualWhispers.
425 points, ended March 6, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So sad
You truly captured the essence of heart break with your words. Great job, if sad.
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Awww
Sad broken heart
I love to read your rhymes. Always full of great aliteration, you are! (lol-that sounded like yoda talk)
*rianna
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Nice work..
... I love your rhyme flow. It was very nice. You have an exceptional emotional poem here and it was very deep. I enjoy a good deep poem. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. *kassie* -
Very nice!
I love the way you worded it. The she loved and lost... it reminds me alittle of some of my past relationships. It delves right into the heart and soul.
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