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Wish you were mine

Hold your hand
Hold it tight
Walk in the sand
Hold you all night
Give you all of me
Make you smile
Give you more than others see
Make Love worthwhile
Always Call
Give you my heart
Never let you fall
Would never part
Bring you flowers
Love you forever

Sit with you for hours
Neglect you never
Make you laugh

Make it all divine

Hope to be your other half

Wish you were mine











 

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  • fantasylandthinker01
    May 15, 2008
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    wow i wish i had a guy that would treat me like that...haha thats y im currently single!!!

  • The-missing-pieces
    May 8, 2008
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    love it

    its so deep. i really like it


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 30, 2007
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    So Sweet! To bad there are not more men out there like you willing to express themselves.

  • Romanee
    October 7, 2007

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    lovely

    This is a really beautiful love poem, nice rhythm and flow, I love the lines
    Walk in the sand
    Hold you all night
    as it creates stunning imagery in my mind, great write, keep it up, Romanee, xx


  • Kleyda14
    April 15, 2007
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    I like this one a lot. I dont have much else to say but I like!


  • Child of an Angel
    March 17, 2007
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    Hmm

    Who made you write this? I know it wasnt me lol. I asnt around you yet? Ok im jealous! LMAO But still i love the wording and flow. You are good at this, how dare you place doubts in my mind? lol Wonderful job, im loving it!


  • SouthernSexGoddess
    March 9, 2007
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    Damn!

    U get me in every one of your poems! They are so good! i wish I could find a guy like you!


  • unanswered
    March 7, 2007
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    I lked this. It was beautiful and filled with alot of love. Thank you for entering.

  • loveashley
    March 4, 2007
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    This is really cute!! i love it!!! :]

  • Calamity Soul
    March 4, 2007

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    Awww...This is pretty and sweet.

    'Such bliss in dreams hold in hands,
    For starcrossed lovers', live their life
    Such desires upon the things you would like
    Would only be the future, you would want'

    The things in the poem, sounded like my wishes in "Mr.Right" in the future for me.

    Keep on writting.

  • SammyJo
    March 1, 2007

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    ooo so sweet i loved it so very much . . . it was touching i wish i had a man like that . . . i don't even have a man . . . well yet well i loved the poem good job keep it up


  • DrownInImperfection
    March 1, 2007

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    wow, that was really sweet. it had a nice ryhme flow too. good job.

  • nothinghere silver member
    March 1, 2007

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    This is beautiful, I love the rhyme, must be someone very special in your life, to deserve something so beautiful

    Karen
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