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OPTION-7----Pancha Bhuthatmikam

Pancha Bhuthatmikam ----------
[ comprising of five elements of nature]
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I don’t stare at the sky
Knowing that it is highly placed and easily  not reachable


Nor feel irksome at any time
To feel great about the depth of the sea
having evidenced with all  the derivative of my sinking  heart


I don’t experience any wave of  suffocation at any length
When I observe the velocity of the air breezes  that storm  and stir in my soul


Nor expect any  act  of humiliation or just suffocation too
When I move before the heat weave of the fire stocks


I also don’t get aggrieved  at any speck
When I stroll in exhilaration on  the sands of mother earth
saluting her all the times for her patience to experience all odds straight away

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 1, 2007
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    Very nice, thank you for writing and entering in my contest.
    I really liked the ending:
    "When I stroll in exhilaration on the sands of mother earth
    saluting her all the times for her patience to experience all odds straight away"

    Keep on writing, and good luck.
    Nooni