Pancha Bhuthatmikam ----------
[ comprising of five elements of nature]
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I don’t stare at the sky
Knowing that it is highly placed and easily not reachable
Nor feel irksome at any time
To feel great about the depth of the sea
having evidenced with all the derivative of my sinking heart
I don’t experience any wave of suffocation at any length
When I observe the velocity of the air breezes that storm and stir in my soul
Nor expect any act of humiliation or just suffocation too
When I move before the heat weave of the fire stocks
I also don’t get aggrieved at any speck
When I stroll in exhilaration on the sands of mother earth
saluting her all the times for her patience to experience all odds straight away
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A contest entry
- OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
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Comments
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Very nice, thank you for writing and entering in my contest.
I really liked the ending:
"When I stroll in exhilaration on the sands of mother earth
saluting her all the times for her patience to experience all odds straight away"
Keep on writing, and good luck.
Nooni

