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Oneness

Lost,
Searching.

Illusions,
Dillusional.

Fairytales,
Fictional.

Complete,
Oneness.

A contest entry

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 1, 2007

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    Sounds like you have become one with the lies, searching for the truth, yet together with the false realities.
    Ineresting write. Best to you in the contest.

    Mouser


  • lucy sky-diamond
    March 1, 2007

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    short but effective, to the point, and has lasting impact. thank you very much for this fine entry, and good luck